Creating narrative and copy - Mood boards/Editorial Visual/ Mood & tone

                   For the second task of this physical studio brief we had to print off images relevant to our short stories, including pictures of the setting and characters so we could create a mood board on a3 card that would illustrate the direction of our story and quickly inform others of the 'feel' of our narratives. Below is my draft/initial mood board based on my story, but I feel changes need to be made as at the moment I am not sure you could grasp the story from the mood board. Also I am concerned with using too many images and it looking too busy, but also feel lots of white space will not look good.